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Old 07-03-2009, 01:35 PM
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YesterdayIn the nineteenth century the United States had become the world's dumping ground for counterfeit, contaminated, diluted, and decomposed drug materials; a dangerous situation.1859: Boston, a first study on products’ quality revealed a terrifying situation: milk and wine were diluted with water, pepper with dirt, and coffee with cereal; residues of arsenic and other toxicpesticides on food. 1860: the first National food law was passed in Great Britain.1880: England blocked a margarine lot imported from Unite States, adulterated with putrefied entrails of livestock.1906: the Pure Food and Drug Act was passed by Washington Congress thanks even to Jungle of Sinclair.NowOur fruit, vegetables, meat and milk are found to contain toxic pesticides in trace amounts. Meats are preserved with nitrite and nitrate salts against the bacterial growth that causes botulism and cancer.2007: Melamine has also been found in scores of China’s exports including toothpaste, cough syrup, yogurt, dog and cat food, eggs, ice cream, chicken, chocolate, breads and cakes and other products.Melamine, commonly used in plastics and dishware, can lead to urinary problems such as kidney stones and even renal failure.2008: Unite States and Europe confirms the “quarantine” on poisoned milk from China.Tomorrow The number of dead and sick person for cancer will increase. The people will try to buy biologic food or to grow vegetables in its own garden.
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Old 07-03-2009, 01:42 PM
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Old 07-03-2009, 01:49 PM
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The number of dead and sick PEOPLE for cancer will increase. The people will try to buy ORGANIC foods or grow vegetables in THEIR own gardenS.
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Old 07-03-2009, 01:56 PM
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YesterdayIn the nineteenth century, the United States had become the world's dumping ground for counterfeit, contaminated, diluted, and decomposed drug materials; a dangerous situation.1859: Boston, a first study on products’ quality revealed a terrifying situation: milk and wine were diluted with water, pepper with dirt, and coffee with cereal; residues of arsenic and other toxic pesticides on food. 1860: the first National food law was passed in Great Britain.1880: England blocked a margarine lot imported from United States, adulterated with putrefied entrails of livestock.1906: the Pure Food and Drug Act was passed by Washington Congress thanks even to Jungle of Sinclair.NowOur fruit, vegetables, meat and milk are found to contain toxic pesticides in trace amounts. Meats are preserved with nitrite and nitrate salts against the bacterial growth that causes botulism and cancer.2007: Melamine has also been found in scores of China’s exports including toothpaste, cough syrup, yogurt, dog and cat food, eggs, ice cream, chicken, chocolate, breads and cakes and other products.Melamine, commonly used in plastics and dishware, can lead to urinary problems such as kidney stones and even renal failure.2008: Unite States and Europe confirms the “quarantine” on poisoned milk from China.TomorrowThe number of dead and sick person for cancer will increase. The people will try to buy biologic food or to grow vegetables in its own garden.------it is apretty good article! good luck on it!
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Old 07-03-2009, 02:04 PM
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1880: England blocked a margarine lot imported from THE UniteD States, adulterated with putrefied entrails of livestock.1906: the Pure Food and Drug Act was passed by Washington Congress thanks even to 'THE Jungle' BY Sinclair.NOWADAYSOur fruit, vegetables, meat and milk are found to contain toxic pesticides in traceABLE amounts. 2008: THE UniteD States and Europe CONFIRM the “quarantine” on poisoned milk from China.TomorrowThe number of dead and sick personS FROM cancer will increase. PEOPLE will try to buy biologic food or to grow vegetables in THEIR own garden.
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