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Old 07-03-2009, 06:31 PM
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What grade you are in and what your teacher is looking for makes a difference on how much leeway you are given for mistakes and how your paper should be set up. Here are a few suggestions so you can check and rewrite your own report: First of all, give your paper a title. The second paragraph describing quartz would be a better introduction followed by the first paragraph. Watch your spelling. Do you have spell check on your computer? If you do........use it. It will help correct your misspells. Watch your capitalization (your headings should be uniform), your punctuation (to many commas which make a report hard to read) and finally watch your wording (don't get verbose, definition below); for example........Cultured quartz, that is,quartz crystals.... "That is" isn't really needed. Restructure the sentence with less words and less punctuation. Hope that helps.Basically your report is interesting and has some good information. Good luck.
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